Hi boys, I'm sure you are excelent students and I'm sure I'm not going to have any problem with you, specially with Edgar, becaus he was one of my best students last semester, if you have problems, he can help you very well.
O.K. You are going to write 150 words about your partner.
You are going to add a commentary of the things your classmates say about his/her life with 50 words at least.
See you at the end of the week, bye and good look in your new adventure.
He is a boy who like to play video games, play basketball, play soccer, he like to tell jokes, go to the squart with his friends and see the girls. His name is Antonio de Jesús Alvarado Guzmán. He wanna visit countries how Italy, UK, Japan, Spain, and others. He wanna study lenguages. He like fruit but not much like vegetables. He is in capacitation of english because he don´t chose English. But English is cool, he live in Garcia de la Cadena in the state of Zacatecas. He work in the ranch he help his cousins, he wanna say bad words to the other people because the other people say me bad words and he wanna defend he. He like to fight and kicking ass. He like to drink beers and juices. He like to be happy and he is a little smart. He like the English.
ResponderEliminarHis name is Alejandro, his last name is Sandoval, his father is Martin Sandoval, his mother is Elva Guzman and his sister is Sandra Sandoval.
ResponderEliminarhe like`s to listen to music, his favorite music is norteño corridos, and His favorite artists are “Gerardo Ortiz”, “los buitres de Culiacan Sinaloa“, “Larry Hernandez” and “Primavera”.
He like`s to play soccer with His friends Ernesto, Edgar, Erick and flavio, His favorite team is ”Las chivas de Guadalajara”, “Manchester” and the Mexican team. And His favorite players are Christiano Ronaldo, Messi, and Javier.
He likes to play videogames, with His sister.
In his free time he goes to the ranch with his father.
In His free time he goes to the Plaza with His friends, and goes to Erick`s house, he doesn’t like to do homework.
Her name is Blanca Yuritza Sandoval Nunez. She is short and she has green eyes and she has straight brown hair. Actually she lives in Garcia de la cadena. How day she circulation 3th semester in the colegio de bachilleres. She likes the school because she wanna study psychology and she need to be very intelligent. In her free time she likes to read so much and listen to music.
ResponderEliminarIn her house she helps her mom with sweep the floor, wash the dishes and cloths and clean her house. She has 16 years old and her love children and she would like to study preschool.
Her boyfriend is 16 years old and he is wording right now.
She loves her family and she love singing, she like so much play soccer.
Her best friends are Sonia, yesenia, angelica and Lucero, she like past time with them.
She doesn’t like to go Guadalajara because she is bored.
She likes watch to movies in her free time.
Her Description.
ResponderEliminarHer name is Maribel Nunez Robles.
She was born in “Zapopan Jalisco” in December of 1995.
She likes to play volleyball, basquetball and soccer, ball she don’t like to play fron-tennis. Her favorite color is the black but she doesn’t like brown. She like to read and write, also she like to watch T.V. listen to music and dance.
She lives in “Garcia de la Cadena Zacatecas”, it’s a beautiful town, but it’s something good. She is tall, her hair is brown and large and straight, hers eyes are browns her skin it’s white, She is 15 years old.
She likes to eat “enchiladas” and pizza but her favorite food is “Las Flautas”
She is funny and angry, she has a lot friends and she like to talk with them.
She has 3 brothers, she plays with them her mom it’s very sympathetic and her and my dad is very angry.
She is very happy.
Her description:
ResponderEliminarHer name is Blanca Estela Tovar Robles, she is 16 old. She was born the September 23th the 1994 in Zapopan, Jalisco city.
She likes to play basketball in her house with her family although; she annoys to play with her friends.
She is medium, slender, and blonde and her hair is straight.
Her eyes are tune green dark. She likes to eat “pozole, tamales, flautas, enchiladas” and much thing and some occasions spontaneous.
She likes to watching T.V and to play videogames (play 2 skras).
The fruits what she likes sound pear, apple, watermelon and peach.
She likes listen the music. Her sleep is visited the Taj Mahal and saw the wall of China. She likes the ice-cream the lemon
She likes cookies but she prefers the flan and that’s how she is.
Her name is AIKO GUZMAN ALVAREZ I like in “Garcia de la cadena”. She likes to go to the school and speak with my friends.
ResponderEliminarShe likes listening to music in the night and cook the Saturday for my family she don´ t like to go the “Guadalajara”.
She likes speak with my family and play video games with her brother
She don´t like the running in the park she like to swin in the river with my family and to house the her brother “MARIO” and your family she likes watch “la que no podia amar”,”pancho lopez” “dos hogares”,”la casa del lado”,”and “desiciones extremas”.
She don´t like to watch “laura en America” , “se vale” and “al “extreme”. She like to writle and read a book .she like to play volleyball with my friends in the school.
She likes to open your face book and speak with mely in internet.
She likes eat hot dog.
Her description
ResponderEliminarHer name is Jenny Abigail Garcia Rodriguez .she was born in Zapopan Jalisco in October 16 the 1994 and she lives in Garcia de la Cadena Zacatecas, she is sixteen years old.
Her burnet and medium height my eyes are brown and mediums.
Her self one person sociable friendly fonny and she like to the dance go to the cuber a open her Facebook and check her friends Facebook.
She like the sports for example volley ball, soccer, basketball, eat pizza, “enchiladas”, “pozole, ”burritos, ”tamales”, and very much things although she doesn’t liken the “menudo ” also she like so what television watch movies the action, romantic and very much, she like to go to the Guadalajara to the sopping, go to the cinema, eat ice cream in the square with her friends and talk with them some times, she like to go to the walk in the town in the afternoon.
Her name is Perla Karina Guzmán Mariscal. She was born in Trinidad Garcia de la Cadena Zacatecas the doy 16th the January the 1995. She is medium height. She have big a brown eyes. She have broker arm. Her hair is long. She is the intelligent person and amusing. She like to much to play basketball is her favorite sport .
ResponderEliminarIn her free times I like listen to music, she watch TV practice her favorite sport her colors favorite are read and black.
She student in Trinidad García de la Cadena Zacatecas in the school the Colegio de Bachilleres del estado de Zacatecas plantel García de la Cadena in second year.
Her father is José Guzmán Castro and her mother is María Guadalupe Mariscal Guzmán, she have three brothers and one sister. She is friendly, responsibly, charitable. The music that sha like is pop. Her favorite bond is Camila. Her favorite food is tamales.
Her name is Marialuisa Alvarado Torres, she is 16 years old, she was born in Guadalajara, Jalisco but she lives in Garcia de la Cadena, Zacatecas. She studies in the COBAEZ school, she likes to study very much. She is persistent, reserved, respectful and very tolerant. She likes to play basketball and football soccer, she likes to watch TV, read a love stories, cook with her mother, converse with her friends (though hardly ever she visits them), she likes to eat “pozole” and “tamales”. Her favorite colors are the purple and blue, she loves to listen to music and her favorite singer is chayanne (she likes all his songs), she likes to observe the sky and the moon. She doesn´t like the spiders and she hates the scorpions, she detest a the false and hypocritical people, she doesn´t like to play volleyball, classic music, watch a horror movies. She is a girl tail, her hair is black and wavy, she has a medium brown eyes.
ResponderEliminarFinally, she is happy was it so…
Her name is Maria Bernice Vera Alvarez, she likes to play basketball and soccer. She was born in Zacatecas, Zacatecas in June 19th of 1994. In her free time she likes to watch T.V and listen to music especially pop music.
ResponderEliminarShe has dark-skinned; her hair is lank and very black. Her eyes are big and color brown. Her lips are big. She is slim and she is medium height.
She doesn’t like to play video games and play volleyball.
She is 17 years old, she lives in T. Garcia de la Cadena, Zacatecas, in the #171 Mariano Matamoros street. She lives her parents and 4 brothers; Paula Miguel, Santiago and Diego.
Her favorite song is “the lazy song” of Bruno Marx.
In the T.V she likes to watch the program of “poptico” what projecting in C7.
Her friends are Marialuisa, Lupita, Melissa, Blanca Flor, Perla, Sonia, Jenny, Maribel, etc…
She likes to read a book especially “jesper” and “Johon Lennon” sound very fantastic!!!
Her name is Yesenia Doñate Magallanes she is a medium. Nowadays she course in the 3th payment. In the “Colegio De Bachilleres Plantel Garcia De La Cadena Zacatecas” She likes to sleeps in the bedroom. She likes to listend to miusic. She haves two sister and two parents. Her mother is Florita Magallanes Guzman and her father is Raul Doñate Robles.
ResponderEliminarShe haves fourth friends, she was burn in Zapopan Jalisco, she is 15 years old. She studies the preschooler in “Sor Juana Ines de la Cruz”, studies first and second degree of primary in Zapopan. She cames to lives in Garcia de la Cadena Zacatecas and finish the primary one in school “Mariano Matamoros”.
She studies in the secondary in the school “Francisco Garcia Salinas” she likes to haves a good time with your fiends. She likes to watch t.v.
She likes to go to the cyber and square with your friends.
Ernesto Magallanes is a good boy, he likes a music, specially the “sinaloense” music, he likes the football soccer and her favorite team of Mexican league is America, in the Argentina league is the Boca Juniors, in the Brazilian league is the Fluminense, in the American league is the Chicago fire, in Spanish league is the Arsenal F.C, in the Italian league is the inter, in the Portuguese league is the Porto.
ResponderEliminarHer favorite player of the world is Lionel Messi, hehas won the premium of “the messias” he is the best player.
Other of her favorite players of the world is Theo Walcott, English player, he is a faster player of the world, and he is a good player.
He likes to practice the soccer, is her favorite sport, because in this sport there are passion, adrenaline, effort, delivery and sweat.
His name is BRYAN RAYMUNDO ROBLES CERVANTES he is studing in Cobaez Garcia de la Cadena, he is tall, chubby, white, he has brown eyes and hair, he likes listen music and playing basketball on his free time, he also likes to go to dances and parties, he choses English capacitation, because he thinks he needs to refresh your English, because he is forgetting it, and its been seven years that he haves not practiced, he thinks he still have a good accent and deacent talk, but he haves a hard time wrighting, and this is the most important reason that he is taking this capacitation course, he thinks it will be a little hard in the begin but he gets used to it, he is also looking forward to be more applied a constant on your school work an only when he is done, thing`s likes to plays video games, basketball and listen to music.
ResponderEliminarHer name is Maria Guadalupe Llamas Guzman She was born in Zapopan Jalisco Mexico in December 27 in year of the 1994. She is living in one town called Trinidad Garcia de la Cadena Mexico in the address number 42 Ignacio Caloca Street.
ResponderEliminarShe is daughter of José Llamas Sandoval and her mother is Maria Imelda Guzman Sanchez, she has one sister called Maria Del Carmen Llamas and one brother called Jose Andres Llamas Guzman. She is happy, In her physical is the medium height, she is polite, sympathetic, Smiling, friendly, supportive, respectful, loving, charitable, loyal, affectionate, lawful, responsible, honest and worker. In her physical is the brown eyes, she has two legs, two foot, one mount, two arms, two hand, her hair is brown and lank and is long, She has one snub nose, her eyes are big, and she has ten finger , and ten toes. Her favorite sport is the baseball and her favorite color is the blue.
Her name is Hilda Lilliana Castro Ramirez, she was born on May 19, 1995 in Zapopan Jalisco, she has 16 years of age, and she is in third semester of high school.
ResponderEliminarShe is dark-skinned, she is of small stature, thin.
She is curly black hair and brown eyes.
She is very serious and shy but she always tries to be positive.
She like listening to music watching TV and go play volleyball with her friends and watch movies also go eat some ice cream to the square
She doesn't like meat or even people trying to pretend they are not also she hates people who mock others for being different and humiliate.
Her favorite movie is "nightmare before Christmas"
Her favorite food is spaghetti
The music that she likes is rock
Her favorite band is "my chemical romance"
And she likes Jared Leto and she thinks he is very handsome.
Her favorite colors are black and pink...
for me edgar "chico" is a girl cause he say me that, i ask her is for a boy o for a girl and he say me is for a boy but it isn't, his is for a boy, and he say me write her for me and cause that he is a girl. hahaha
ResponderEliminarHer name is angelica Elizabeth Zaragoza Garcia, she courses 3th payment in the “colegio de bachilleres plantel Garcia de la cadena zacatecas” she likes to sleep in her bedroom, she likes to watch TV. And listen to music.
ResponderEliminarShe is medium and thin, she has four brothers and two parents her mother is Josefina Garcia Guzman and her father is Francisco Javier Zaragoza Garcia, she has four friends, she likes drink the lemonade. She preferred color is the fiusha and purple, in her free time she likes go to square and study. In the morning she comes at the school.
She likes to play the soccer, she likes to go to the school.
She doesn`t likes wake me up earl, she visit her grandparents, she hat clean her bedroom.
Her name is Lucero Gutierrez robles, she is tall and she is thin, she lives in Garcia de la Cadena but in a few days she will live in Zapopan Jalisco she doesn´t like the idea. She has a boyfriend, his name is Julio Adrian robles Lopez. He is working in the United States. In her house she swept the floor, wash the dishes and clean her house and cook. She likes to listen to music and she likes to watch TV, she doesn´t like to go to work with her father. In the weekend her sister will come to Garcia de la cadena she likes the school because she wanna study medicine teacher or engineering. She as born in Zapopan Jalisco. She study the primary in the school Mariano Matamoros and she studies the secondary in the school Francisco Garcia Salinas. Her best friends are Sonia, yesenia, angelica and yuritza. She likes past time with her friends.
ResponderEliminarComment about what Edgar Rodriguez wrote
ResponderEliminarWell I think that what Edgar wrote about Antonio de Jesus, is Pretty cool, because I share a lot of likings with him, like hang out with my friends in the plaza, play videogames and basketball, but he needs to put “S” in some of the verbs he used in the description, but I didn’t like some of the tings Antonio de Jesus said because he sounded kind of arrogant, but in an overall it was ok.
Comment about what Blanca Tovar wrote
I think that the things that Blanca wrote about Jenny, are nice, she described her self in all the aspects, but I think that a part of the text isn’t correctly written, because the structure of some of the sentences isn’t the correct one to use, but you can understand it anyways so its ok, but it doesn’t say about the reason she`s in the English capacitating.
I will comment of Berenice and Angelica. I shall begin with Berenice:
ResponderEliminarOf otrtografia nothing I can not I think that is correct as it rests. I say maybe because I'm not an expert on that. The number of words that she wrote is correct, and with regard to what she says Marialuisa, I'm sure the correctly described. I liked the writing.
I speak now of Angelica:
Their spellings not say anything. For me the arrangement of words is right, just a couple of points where commas go deveria.
I think the way she described it is well, but I think it has too many words in Spanish. (Although I also ise).
Like the previous comment, I also like this.
however bryan as expert in english the translation is great....alex is a very intelligent person only thing is that it is too loose many times and in need of your help and I never denies I think we have things in common like playing video games alex is a good friend!!!!!!
ResponderEliminarjenny your translation is OK but you had made a mistake by putting in her age “is” instead of “has”. your translation was good but there were some errors inmissing words to complete or make more accurate description on blanca. Blanca is good to do sport but is not recommended you playvideo games much.
ResponderEliminarWow! Maria Luisa your comment is very well elaborated because you did a very good description of the personality of Bernice. You are a perfect translator I think you did not have any errors it seems everything is very well written. Bere have good taste i love Bruno mars. Congratulations Maria Luis.
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ResponderEliminarI happened to comment on the description that Jenny did and also on the description that Lucero did.
ResponderEliminarJenny description that did:
Well I think Jenny Garcia Rodriguez did very well the description about Blanca Tovar because it mentions Blanca many important aspects of her personality and also also mentions that she likes and that she doesn´t like.
Although he had some small mistakes, but I think he did a great job.
Lucero description that did:
Lucero's description is very good because she speaks very well of Yuritza Sandoval mentions many of the things she likes and also she does not like.
She also talks a lot about her family she said that you love them.
And while Lucero had some problems with spelling his description is very well done.
Comment # 1 (Yari)
ResponderEliminarHello, I think that Yari has a good way to write in English. I think Yari will pass this school subject, because it seems that you learn quickly, and I think Aiko watch much TV haha, I think the TV show "Señorita Laura" is funny, I bid you farewell, goodbye, congratulations Yari.
*PERLITA*
ResponderEliminarMy opinión addres the text who publish my friend Perlita is positive since I think who not have bad orthography, I say who see very goob. Who good who out with her work and who the beech publish good time. It hope so who memorize goob the text the people who turn present, this case a LILI.
*LILI*
ResponderEliminarHello!!! Think who it text who write Lili see very good, the orthography such seem who see good. Who good who beech finish her text goob time. It hope so and yes can memorize the text good for the day the her turn present front all group, it hope so who not this very complicated…..
1. I think so the work of Lucero Gutierrez is good, she don´t make a mistake in the orthography, also she know good to Blanca Yuritza because she is his friend, and she can´t write lies about his friend. I think so the text describe perfectly at Yury, all right!
ResponderEliminar2. Concerning of the work of Hilda Liliana, I think so all right word, neither Lili make a mistake in the orthography but I think so the text about Maria Guadalupe is less than explicit, I think so in the text use many descriptive adjectives (exaggeratedly). But I think so the text describe perfectly at Maria Guadalupe. Lili make a good work, all right!
Marialuisa has good spelling though has some errors but not so important and I realized that lacked some punctuation (the part that says “…Blanca Flor…” its mild but i look, jeje)…what matters its that comply with work…as well joined any wors.
ResponderEliminarMarialuisa for my is the very best!!!
Antonio de Jesus has good spelling though has some errors. He writes “her” instead of “his”…smallest error but very important. I don´t know nothingness about of the writing in English but reach make out the error…
Good description…he haves a good knowledge of the matter, if only that continue thus!!!
Very well!!! (both)
• HI EVERYTHING IM YARI ¿HOW ARE YOU?...BUT WHAT GOOD ORTTHOGRAPHIC HAVE EDGAR DON´T HAVE ALMOST MISTAKE FABULOUS DESCRIPTION..IN FACT CHUY IS GENEROUS,GENTILE,BRILLIANT..ALTHOUGH HAVE LITTLE TIME OF TO KNOW THIS GOOD FRIEND EVERY TIME STAY HAPPY AND TO SAY JOKES CHUY THIS FRIENDLY...:
ResponderEliminarcomment the text de yuritza Sandoval . hello, i think that yuri has a good student and understand english very welland can write very well English I think so the text describes perfectly at lucero, all right. but I give it too late but as the say the saying goes better lare than neck
ResponderEliminarcomment the text de blanca tobar. Hello I think than blanca has good has a very good splling in English and good student in the class and I think jenny is very good choices foods and likes to char on facebook I think so the text describes perfectly at jenny.
Comment about what Perla wrote
ResponderEliminarIt is a good job, and I think is important know the tastes of our colleagues to know more of them and things that like. And this work is important for rating, and I think it's a good job because you have no spelling mistakes, this shows that both Lily and you, you are good with English.
Comment about what Blanca wrote
You did a good job Blanca, although you have some mistakes, and you have brown eyes? ... you are describing to Jenny?.... remember that after the "she" the verb leads "s", for example in the prayer "she like" is "she likes"... and is important to know that Jenny was born in Zapopan Jalisco, because the teacher thought that she was born in united states.
Lupita
ResponderEliminarI Perla Karina Guzmán Mariscal think who the work who my companion Maria Guadalupe Llamas Guzmán take up the net see very very good, I think her text is clear and yes comprise her text who talk the my. Good this is all I criticize the work the my friend Lupita Llamas.
Lily
I Perla Karina Guzmán Mariscal thinks who the text who my friend Hilda Liliana Castro Ramirez create is very good, think who her text is one little complicated for who the memorize for present forehead a all group but to hope up who yes the to get. Good see is all. Bye.
Comment about Bryan Raimundo wrote
ResponderEliminarHey Bryan what’s up?!? How are you??What did you say of the school??? That´s nice rightyou do a good job, you have good orthography, but it´s good don’t repeat much the verbs and you don’t complete the number correct of the words eee. Hey, Alex like´s the “norteñoscorridos”???Or the “narcocorridos”???I like the “corridos”, that’s a good music…… He mother name´s Elva???? :p So what???Hisname isElviaha-ha…. See you soon….
Coment about Itzayari wrote
Hello Yari!!!!! How are you??? You do a good job, but you don´t have a good orthography hahaha your text don’t agree to much but you complete the correct number of the words… you do a good job, you are a good schoolmate, you are very funny, but sometimes you are angry… good description Aiko, she is very funny, and she likes to check the Facebook and speak with Mely???, me too!!! :D:o See you soon…
I will comment of Lupita and Perla. I shall begin with Lupita:
ResponderEliminarWell I think that it lacks know how to use the verb have for example use “have” in instead “has” because she is talking about of she and a add “s” in the verbs. The number of words is correct Perla and Lupita are one the best friends. its a great work!!!
I speak now of Perla:
Well I think that in general this good, because this talking of tastes of Lili, for example watch T.V, listen to music, her movies favorites bus I think lacks add “s” in the some verbs. The number of the words is correct. Lili is one person very especial for my and I like her form be. Excellent job!!!
My comment is on the yari work:
ResponderEliminarthis well what you meant but in some occasions you spoke in first person when it should be in third, as where you put " my " it should be " her ", this very interesting one their daily life because I also like to make many of the things that she seizes for example: to do the novel of a “una familia con suerte", and” Dos Hogares”
My comment is on the jenny work:
This well that she makes sport so that this healthy one, and that she eats fruit because our body needs it, I like their hair and its eyes are very beautiful, I also like to eat fruits, and it is very amusing to play video games although they remove you a lot of time.
Comment # 2 (Maribel)
ResponderEliminarHi Maribel, I think you know very well translate texts,this ability will be very useful in your classes, but especially in your future life, because speaking English is very important today, since English is the universal language.I think I should see less soccer, and talk about other things, well, goodbye.
HELLO
ResponderEliminarPerlita
I like to much the text is perla , I think the way she described it is very good and your spelling is very good. She demonstrated your ability in the class of English not having many spelling mistakes in their work Your information is very complete and very organized. Bye
HELLO
Llamas
I think that Lupe had to consult a dictionary because it has many spelling mistakes and many errors in write the life of his friend.but not watch the wrong the your homework. Also I think they bother to do that counts a lot. change words but I think you tried and that counts a lot.
bye
I really like very much Miss Vera Alvarez MariaBernice because it is a happy, responsible, friendly, intelligent, a good companion and super cool ... and we have some common tastes like: playing football in time to music and watch llibresecuchar television, as well as the same kind of pop music that is not me .. haha ... like video games.
ResponderEliminarHer name is Aiko Guzman, she is my classmate.
ResponderEliminarShe has sixteen years old, born on January 24th, 1995 in Guadalajara Jalisco.
She is my best friend; she's funny, happy, and angry.
She has two brothers Mario and Cesar, also two nieces. Their parents are Eutiquio and Alicia, the two are teachers.
All their friends are, because it is a very nice person who always has a smile on her face.
She likes school, listening to music, play volleyball, go to the place with friends and eating ice cream.
In her free time she enjoys watching television, she loves The Simpsons and Sponge Bob also likes watching soap operas as La Reyna del Sur and Decisiones Extremas. Aiko is always laughing with Olivia and me. Her favorite color is black and her favorite food is gorditas. She likes buy tennis shoes, jackets, t-shirts, shoes and caps. She is a great person and she has a good humor.
I going to write about the comments or something like that of Lilli and marialuisa, I listened about they, Lilli is a girl who like to go with her friends and talking, is a little serious and angry, marialuisa is a girl who like to play and listen to music and that things, and this is my comment about that, this is it
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